Now he is lying in hospital, very ill, after a sudden heart attack. He is on life support but still conscious and aware of his surroundings. The doctors have told Annie to come as soon as she can because he might not last the night. She brings her nine year old son, Michael, with her. Michael has never met his grandfather before this. They are standing next to his bed and Alfred opens his eyes.
Write at least 200 words on this situation from each person’s point of view. Write it as though they are telling someone else about their experience. Keep all your writing in the first person.
Here's the outcome (I got carried away and went beyond the 200 words per person, turned it into a story and voila!... this came with a fab grade and great comments!) -
I know it's small - bear with me as I work out this technology but you can also read a fullscreen version
Pride and Promises